打造高分英语写作的利器

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对于英语写作,有和中文有一些共通点,拿雅思作文来说,求考生根据图表,首先描述图画的大致情况,然后要求考生对图画进行适当的阐释(解释、说明和分析),最后要求考生给出自己的建议、观点、原因等等。 一般写三段。

打造高分英语写作的利器

一、开头注重描述图表内容和数据

1、 As is vividly shown in the picture( 如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如

果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) above, 图画的内容 。The picture( 如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) tells ( 注意,如果是前面的图画是复数,则用tell) us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。

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2、 Recent years people in 地名(比如中国、北京、美国等等) have witnessed the fact that 描述图片里的现象 , And it is very common/usual to see that in recent years.

二、注重分析解释陈述数据内容

1、 The implied meaning of the picture(注意,同上进行单复数的处理) should be taken into account seriously. First/To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1,Second/What’s more, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2。 Last but not least/Finally, 揭示涵义/愿意/结果3(如果有的话)。And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon) has arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people.

2、 There may/might be three( 也可以是两个哦,那就是two啦) factors which contribute

to/are responsible for/explain/can make clear the 图片解释的现象。 First of all, 原因1。And then the second reason is that 原因2。The last reason,I think,is that 原因3。

三、提出自己的观点和解决方案

1, In my view / point of view (or As for me), We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture. First, we should 具体的措施1. And then we have to / must 具体的措施2. Only in these ways, can we

Solve the problem of 具体的问题.

2, It is true that these unique / secial points can / could together remind us that we should take some measures to solve it. 采取的措施1和2. Only in this way can we 实现的目标!

在雅思作文中,往往很多人注重结构和观点的论证,但是很好注意到,如果可以很好的运用到一些名言警句或者英文成语。但是千万不要用不地道的表达。

例如 :No pains, no gains 不是地道英语谚语

No pains, no gains 这个说法充斥在整个中国的英语界,包括梁实秋主编的《远东英汉词典》和大陆的《新英汉词典》。其实,我们无法在英国和美国出版的词典里查到这个短句。正宗的说法是:No pain, no gain.

《麦克米伦高阶英语词典》:No pain,no gain (spoken):used for saying that you have to work hard if you want to achieve something.

美国的McGraw-Hills Dictionary of American Idioms and Phrasal Verbs 有这个短句: No pain, no gain. Fig. If you want to improve, you must work so hard that it hurts. (Associated with sports and physical exercise.)

I can’t do any more push-ups. My muscles hurt.

No pain, no gain. Come on, everybody! Run one more lap! No pain, no gain!

pains往往是别的含义:Growing pains,winning gains. Women emancipation brings gains--and pains.

所以如果同学们没有把握的话,请不要故意卖弄,使得弄巧成拙反而拉低分数,千万谨记使用自己拿得出手的能力范围内的句式。

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